From: Rebecca Wenker - NOAA Affiliate Date: Mon, Sep 18, 2023 at 3:12?PM Subject: Edit Requests for Documentation File in Accession 0282183 To: Kimberly Edwards - NOAA Affiliate Hi Kim, Similar to the 2022 Florida Benthic package, as we prepared to publish the 2022 NCRMP Florida Fish accession (0282183), we came across a few potential errors in the NCRMP_FL2022_Fish_Metadata.pdf metadata file that we were hoping you could address. They include: 1. Dataset Title, and Extents > Extent Group 1 > End Date The latest date in the data is 2022-11-28, which was provided as the End Date in S2N. However, in both of these sections in the document it is listed as 2022-12-16. This date should be corrected in the PDF file, and I will correct it on my end in the Title and End Date sections in the archive so that it appears correctly on the landing page and in the package metadata. 2. Access Information > Data Use Constraints The "Cite as" statement in this section has incorrect dates listed in the package title, they should be 2022-06-01 to 2022-11-28. 3. Lineage It looks like in the Lineage section of the document (starting around page 7), you referenced the 2018 version of the protocols in the Source row, the 2022 version in the Additional Source row, and then referenced 2021 in the Process Step rows. Therefore, should the rows mentioning dates prior to 2022 be updated to reflect the 2022 protocols used for this dataset? An updated version of NCRMP_FL2022_Fish_Metadata.pdf can be sent to me via email. Thank you for your continued patience and work on this! Rebecca ___________ From: Kimberly Edwards - NOAA Affiliate Date: Tue, Sep 19, 2023 at 8:22?AM Subject: Re: Edit Requests for Documentation File in Accession 0282183 To: Rebecca Wenker - NOAA Affiliate Here is the edited Fish Metadata file. I made all the changes listed above. Just let me know if you find any more needed edits. This will only help down the road in archiving our next FL datasets. Thanks again Kim