From: Troy Kanemura - NOAA Affiliate Date: Wed, Nov 22, 2017 at 7:46 PM Subject: Re: 0157574 and 0157573 To: Zachary Mason - NOAA Affiliate Hi Zack, Ivor has updated the Title / Abstract / Purpose of these metadata records. Please see attached for the InPort and ISO XML files. On Tue, Nov 21, 2017 at 7:31 AM, Zachary Mason - NOAA Affiliate wrote: Thanks Troy! On Mon, Nov 20, 2017 at 6:48 PM, Troy Kanemura - NOAA Affiliate wrote: Hi Zack, Sorry, this email slipped through the cracks. I have forwarded your message along to Ivor, who will be making the requested changes to the Title / Abstract. Keep you posted. On Wed, Nov 8, 2017 at 7:06 AM, Zachary Mason - NOAA Affiliate wrote: Hi Troy, I think that accessions 0157574 and 0157573 need to be tweaked just a bit. The titles of these submissions don't reflect the data that is in them. I believe these two accessions only contain the rebreather data but the title and abstract seem to indicate that they contain the SCUBA data as well. I was thinking that we would change the titles to start with "Rebreather fish surveys..." so that they would look like this: Rebreather fish surveys in the Main Hawaiian Islands from 2015-06-14 to 2015-08-13 (NCEI Accession 0157574) We weren't sure if you wanted us to include "closed circuit" before rebreather, but we could do that as well. "Closed circuit rebreather fish surveys..." The abstracts also need to be edited a bit. They talk about the project more than the data included in each submission. Would it be possible to mostly just describe the rebreather data? It is definitely a good idea to mention that it is one half of the study but from reading the abstract someone should be positive that only the rebreather data is included in that accession. As it is now, the abstract seems to indicate that both data sets are in the accession. Sorry for just getting this to you now. As we are putting our collection accessions together we are catching some things that slipped through before. Let me know if you have any questions or if I can help at all. Thanks, -- Zachary Mason